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“Stranger than Fiction – Uses an interesting narrative construct through omnipotent narrator, however protagonist is aware. In relation to the scope of Julia’s other film, this narrative, film structure will add to her piece. I wonder if an increased length in film will add or detract. It is more or less complete already as a through piec. Due to protagonist in Julia’s film being aware, to a degree, of narrator, perhaps a dialogue between the two would increase tension? Idea of changing finished work is very brave, would new material add? I feel emphasis on subtle elements and reduction of narratorial role would improve, OR continuation of story, ie more script, more filming.”

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